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Saturday, June 28, 2008

The other side (not a near death experience)

It really began with a lot of pancakes.
Friends gathered over food.
Time out: throw some hay.
Friend with wife and child mention cute girl.
I'm in.
calling... calling... calling
message.
still no answer, time to go.
should I stay or should I go now?
GO.
Yard work; trim bushes, clean car, sweat.
try her again,
success!
She said yes
to blindness.
no time to shower or to brush hair
rinse off in the sink.
Sitter or date long game of hot potato baby?
stressful predicament
keep her I say
no search conducted.
Ideas and choices
Planed, paired off, etc.
Here we are go get her
Where?
There.
Underestimated Beauty!
Cheating, laughing over competitive cheating, cute baby continues, lots of smiles
Decision time; stay or go
Easy decision.
Fun prolonged as cheating continues.
chance to move closer
good contact.
time has come
offered the car.
thoughts of end date plan;
first date, blind date, short date...
I can't do it :(
I knew the way home.
one on one fun
delightful teacher interrupts.
Staling.
calling
Dude you coming back?
no time
all the time in the world.
embrace.
still can't... can I... no... but... no
YES!

6 comments:

Aaron E said...

I think I understood 99% of that. Well written! Rachelle said she was so confused afterwards. She only understood 10% of it! :) I told her she needs about 15 good years of living with someone to understand their poetic writings, either that or read it lots of times and try to figure out the context(s). Actually, maybe I had the advantage of already knowing a lot of what you were talking about since you already told me about the blind/double date. You had me laughing and smiling for you.

Lily Ashbrook said...

I understood 100%.

Lily Ashbrook said...

Fine then, I don't understand the pancakes and how good they are. I am with aaron then. 99%

Adam Egg said...

Well pancakes are pancakes, but if you want another view point on all this check out http://lilyashbrook.blogspot.com/2008/06/dont-worry-this-isnt-poetry.html

:P

Janelle said...

Hey Adam, I hear you like my cuz...remember me? Prom 2001 Alta Loma HS!! Hahahaha

Janelle said...

Well aren't you mister popular! :) I'm glad you had a great time with Lily, and I hope it works out. She deserves to be happy and I love her a lot!